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I think it's really good and I like it. You wrote it as you felt at the time and it comes across really well. I'm no critic but I am much impressed. Stick with us, we'll look after you. More please.

Thanks again, much appreciated.

Great first attempt Peanut. I might have a go at this myself later.

Granny’s become an addict;
Yeh! yeh! yeh!

I’ll scream it from the roof,

Keep on popping pills,

Anadin extra’s thrills,

Lemsip for the chills,

Wiki said it’s true,

Now I’m part of you.

Granny’s become an addict;
Yeh! yeh !yeh!

Good one Granny, keep them coming.

I love wiki
Fine place to meet
Peeps take the mickey
But I think its sweet

I lost my Barry
But I don't care
He left me to marry
I'd say she's a mare

Now it's me and Bob
He does a good job
Always ready
And is never a flop

Brenda's my friend
And Hilda is too
Now brenda's on the mend
But Hilda's got flu

Bridge on a Friday
We love to play
And come what may
Were here to stay

Yes we drink
I love my port
Oh what must you think
At least I don't snort

So what do  you think?
Of my first attempt
Does it stink?
Let's see you attempt

Come on don't be shy
Just keep it clean
Give it a try
Just remember this sites an eighteen

Oh Edna, well done. Is Bob on this site too or are you keeping him out of the way ??

Hi Granny, keeping Bob out of the way.

nice one

Thank you T.C.

Break into my house
I'll break your balls
Dirty little mouse
bash your head on the Wall

You run down the street
With me chasing after
I can hear you scream
Above the laughter

I will break your legs
As I swing my bat
I hear you beg
As the bat goes crack!


You won't be back
If you know what's best
Now it's time for a snack
And a well earned rest

nice one Edna lol has some one been bothering you

we are all but algae in this pond full of sharks
like moles all blind and just livin in the dark
no spark, left, inside our souls
just billions of sheeple livin in fish bowls
no rhyme nor reason and it doesnt make sense
why the government wants to keep us all behind the fence
so tense, this, state of affairs
and things have got worse since the days of the blairs
there's no point in listenin to what they've got to say
coz they will turn around and do just what they want anyway
they play, with, peoples lives
and then they go to sleep at night, cuddlin up to their wives
usin tax payers money on personal expenses
and still they dont understand what the offence is
a fence, is, their form of defence,
the one they put up with an act of pretence.

Edna you are really good at this. Maybe it's a new vocation for you. Axe the bridge.

EvilCycle......Love it! Sounds like a rap. Have you done this before?