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Thanks again Granny, yes ive seen a few tv progs on him, i love different theories of life.....


BEYOND THE FRONTIER
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Looking up, the stars i see, the glimmering twinkes of a galaxy
saturn, jupiter, venus too, mercury, saturn, and neptune
mars, pluto and our earth, a picture of beauty from their birth
a man on the moon in 69, "Houston we are doing fine"
Neil Armstrong was his name, and this speech was his fame
That's one small step for a man, one giant leap for mankind
now thats a special verse that will stay in your mind
space travel is nowhere complete, so many obstacles for us to defete
intergalactic travel, a home on mars, teleportation and nuclear cars
so much to see but yet unexplored, a whole vast network, a gift from our lord
one more leap there is to go, before mankind can surely go
where no man has gone before, to stardate twenty thirty four.

Thank you

Mark

You're my man, my mighty king,
And I'm the jewel in your crown,
You're the sun so hot and bright,
I'm your light-rays shining down,

You're the sky so vast and blue,
And I'm the white clouds in your chest,
I'm a river clean and pure,
Who in your ocean finds her rest,

You're the mountain huge and high,
I'm the valley green and wide,
You're the body firm and strong,
And I'm a rib bone on your side,

You're an eagle flying high,
I'm your feathers light and brown,
You're my man, my king of kings,
And I'm the jewel in your crown.

- Nima Akbari

Do you like this one Granny and Tranquil

Yes, I do like it Lightning. You find some really unusual poets.You should try to write some yourself!

i will try Granny xx

Lovely poem Lightning, yes try to write some, if youre sitting anywhere noisy move to a quiet place, relax, dim the lights, free you mind, think only of words and the rest will happen as it should!

I started writing poems in my youth i was a big fan of Hip-Hop/Rap and used to write my own, basically its the same thing, todays Rap has far too much swearing in it and is pretty mindless, early rap had meaningful lyrics, about growing up on the streets, life, love, most of it these days is about sex & drugs, i kind of grew out of it and started listening to Tangerine Dream and other groups that came out of the Berlin School of Music, ie Kraftwerk..

If you get the chance have a peek at this, its Tangerine Dreams - Cloudburst Flight, i think this song sums up life perfectly, Starts off Slow, has a peak, then slows down again..

[youtube]http://www.youtube.co/watch?v=oiTBccgJBCQ[/youtube]

Mark

I will try Tranquil. am more into art than poetry but i do like it.
would love more of yours on here.

Just had a look and listen to this really nice, well done Tranquil

Look all around me and notice the flowers grow
Theres bellbells and tuplips all in a row.
The fresh scent uplifts me and makes me smile.
to see thease pretty things in life ,makes it all worthwhile.

To Granny and Tranquil x
made this up by myself.

Well done Lightning.

That is such a pretty little poem. Very sweet. Now you have startd, you must continue!

Will do Granny, you keep yours comming as well xx

Thats superb Lightning, is that your first ever go?

1 or 2 more verses with that would be amazing, well done

Yes it is Tranquil,glad you like it.
I will try more today to share with you and granny.
You both have a nice day x

Here's one for Springtime.


SPRINGTIME
Pixies riding bumblebees,
Fairies in the blossom trees,
Dresses made from crocus flowers,
Getting wet in sunshine showers.
Snitch snatch Elves swing high and low,
Catching dew drops as they go,
Bathing in the buttercups,
Chasing tails of little pups.
Daffodils with trumpet heads
Calling blue birds from their beds,
Dandelions for this year’s clocks,
Lambs are gambling in their flocks.
Fairies chasing damselflies,
Underneath the bright blue skies.
Playing pipes and ancient horn,
Blowing bubbles, popping corn.
Garlands made, this first of Mai,
For fairies on their special day;
Weaving ribbons round about
A hawthorn pole, then in and out.
Dancing, singing fairy songs,
Nature truly does belong
To fairy folk so very small,
Their springtime is the best of all.

© December 2007

Aw nice one Granny xx