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liked the bit at the start - the rant was hilarious felt it dragged a little in the middle though overall a good effort so well done|!!!!!!!!!!, were was the woods on it?

the kids got a little squeemish at the heart scene, had to pause it at that point lol

Nice to see a bit of local film making, well done on effort and thanks for sharing, comedy wasn't for me tho I'm afraid It would be good to see a filmed on location list in the description as I found it more interesting trying to identify places than the film itself. That is just my honest opinion.

I quite liked it, no problems here with the buffering, but did feel that some parts were dragged out just a little bit longer than were needed trying to get a point across.

It seemed to be a demo of what you can do far more than any plot line, as you seemed to go down several paths without ever concluding one, that's not a criticism if that was what you intended.

Overdid the gore in places, but the heart stomping was good (we've all been there).

Good luck for the future, I've seen a few of these shorts (none with quite so much blood) shown on the big screen in Liverpool, it does get attention.

I like it. It's alternative and imo meant to be odd. Well done. Bit disappointed you weren't in it fingers but Hazel looks well. xx

strange video, only really watched to see what locations I reconised. I likemaking video myself so we should combine sometime and see what we come up wit

I like it. He could almost be me when I was younger.

Nice effort-but you need to get professional help!! :-)

and not for the video hahahaha

if he's at mine he wont be doing the fooking dishes no matter how funny it was lol!

Exactly, Dave!! lol.

Great short video, well made. Not my cup of tea personally but it looked like you had a laugh making it, well done mate.

Regarding the filming most of the street stuff was just around Bebington and Spital where we live. The woods where in Eastham and the bit with the car crash was Campbeltown road in Birkenhead. Oh and the train station was Port Sunlight.

And yeah sorry about the blood I probably should have mentioned that but I forgot about it. We're two lads in our early twenties so it's just too tempting for us to not make it gory.

Anyway so thanks for all the comments and thanks for watching. It's nice to finally show off something that we really enjoyed making

Keep going mate. Steven Spielberg started out like that. Follow your dream. "Non Tatum Illegitemus Carborundum!!" :-)

It was strange and odd, but the thing is like most strange and odd things, I watched it until the end (like Kill List). I felt so sorry for the main character it was almost uncomfortable, like watching a loser sinking further and further into his own world. I nearly jumped out if my skin at the car accident, that was excellent. The guns had to be there as part of the escapism so I understood it. I don't know much about making films and how they are out together but I found this strangely enjoyable and feel that with a bit of effort anyone could have a go.
Nice one.