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#471827 - 11th Feb 2011 11:06pm Your Poems
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Just wondering if we have any aspiring poets out there?? why not share your writing on this thread?? (only post if you are sure you want your writing made public)


Edited by ChrisNewcastle (11th Feb 2011 11:07pm)
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#471843 - 12th Feb 2011 2:08am Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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Shall I lead by example and start us off???
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#567193 - 22nd Aug 2011 3:09pm Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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Yes please.

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#567205 - 22nd Aug 2011 3:19pm Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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A fine old warrior road out one day upon his fair white philly

Im thor - he cried

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#607142 - 24th Oct 2011 3:00am Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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I have a few I have wrote myself, here is one of them I wrote for my grandmother when she passed on (hope you like it)

'The tale about the caterpillar and the butterfly'

Now you have gone
I shall not weep,
as I have the memories
that I shall keep.

And the thoughts of you
that make me smile,
Is how I know
it's all worth while.

It's just a phase your passing through,
something we all have to do.
Like the caterpillar,turns into a butterfly
yet the caterpillar,
it does not die.

You have spread your wings,
you have learned to fly.
That's how I know,
that you did not die.

So forgive me if I do not weep,
Your spirit flies on,
While your body sleeps!

(hope you liked it Wiki,and thanks for reading!)
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#607143 - 24th Oct 2011 3:03am Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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Very moving ..

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#607144 - 24th Oct 2011 3:04am Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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Have u written anymore Chris?

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#607145 - 24th Oct 2011 3:11am Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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yes Judy I have a great one (if I might say so myself lol) about a child at christmas that I'm quite proud of and will put it up nearer the time) I have a fair few to be honest about all things in life different genres etc,do you write yourself Judy?

Thank you for your comment

Chris
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#607207 - 24th Oct 2011 10:31am Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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I will put another one up later on tonight as I've been doing a night shift and really need my bed.

Good morning and good night all!! thumbsup
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#607289 - 24th Oct 2011 12:09pm Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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There was a young man from the coast,
who received a parcel in the post,
in it he observed a crystallised turd,
and the balls of his grandfathers ghost.

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#607610 - 24th Oct 2011 6:17pm Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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is that one of your own Ludwigvan?? lol
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#607619 - 24th Oct 2011 6:32pm Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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Originally Posted By: ChrisNewcastle
is that one of your own Ludwigvan?? lol
I'd like to say it was Chris,but there was a chap called Gerry who drank in Saint Annes club in Rock Ferry about thirty years ago who seemed to have hundreds of them,a lovely chap.

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#612668 - 30th Oct 2011 9:44pm Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
Some poems rhyme
And other ones don't.
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#620230 - 12th Nov 2011 10:26pm Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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Clears throat...

Oh, to be a caterpillar,
Life would be a farce.
Sliding down a lettuce leaf,
And landing on my elbow!

Thank you, thank you! I know, I know...it's my genius - it's such a curse. Some of us are born great - others of us have to have it thrust into us, later in life. Mine was thrust into me before birth - I'd kill my dad, if he was alive!

For my next poem, I'd like to share...

There once was a lady called Perkins
Who was ever so fond of small gherkins.
One day, after tea,
She ate forty-three,
And pickled her internal workings!

B'bum...tisssshhhh!

And, with that, I must away! My forsooth is verily packed with gadzooks and that nasty audience is getting ever closer with those iron bars!

Think well of me, until I heartily strike you into damnable mirth once again - byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! The Phantom Giggly escapes into the night, yet again!

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#629749 - 28th Nov 2011 1:25am Re: Your Poems [Re: ChrisNewcastle]
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That made me laugh Godsplinter thanks for that,you have cheered me up,well not that I was down anyways but you know what I mean.
And you fireman fil thanks to you too mate!

thumbsup clap clap
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